Siemens
since no ones using this
Rough Sketch
1. snazzy title(history of Andrew Ryan up to deciding to build Rapture)
2. Done with the Parasites(contruction of Rapture and the happy early years)
3. Inevitability(classes arise, ryan becomes more tyranical, smuggling begins first crimehead, ADAM found)
4. snazzy title(ADAM is refined and begins abuse, Ryan more tyranical, small conflict ryan v smuggler/low class(Atlas))
5. snazzy title(ADAM is abused heavily,Ryan siezes power, Full war breaks out at new years)
6. snazzy title(Ryan killed, Atlas takes control short-lived then killed)
7. snazzy title(power struggle ensues, Lamb takes over)
Out he bursts taking a few large thankful breaths. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and terribly the flames are the only thing he can see that is moving. Somewhat distraught by his situation he searches for something to float on. Finding a piece of fuselage...
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6. Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic moving as if part of some sort of sadistic piece of art. Suddenly there's a large bang above as a wing of the plane makes impact with the water sending propellor parts whizzing downwards. Sharp edges scream through the water looking for blood, but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings a body to life.
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Dissoriented by the crash with vision blurred by the flames, he swam for safety. He was not sure if it was real, or a part of his dazed imagination, but the man could see an invisible hand twist the trails of fire before him. He followed their path, in hopes this wa...
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You just wait...muwahahahaha!!!!!
The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream through his closed mouth. Out he bursts taking a few large thankful breaths. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and terribly the flames are the only thing he can see that is moving. Somewhat distraught by his situation he searches for something to float on. Finding a piece of fuselage he begi...
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The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he searches for something to...
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The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he searches for something to...
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He is awakened by the morning sun peeking up above the water. The wrecked plane has now all but disappeared except a few pieces of charred fuselage. What had happened to the plane to force it down, was it the engine or lightning, he couldn't seem to remember? The last thing he had in his head was taking a smoke while opening a package from his parents. Oh how he wished they were here now to help him as they had done all those times growing up with them. Venturing back inside the song and light pop on again and he takes another look around, but again only the door out and the bathysphere. It's a very strange room, the way it's designed looks familia...
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The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he searches for something to...
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Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.
The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he ...
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Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.
The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he ...
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Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.
The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. The plane has scattered burning wreckage all around him and flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving. Quickly becoming distraught by his situation he ...
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Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life. The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water.
I took a few large breaths and looked around. The crash has scattered burning wreckage all around and the flames are, morbidly, the only thing I can see moving. I started searching for something to float on while calling out for he...
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Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life. The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water.
I took a few large breaths and looked around. There was burning wreckage scattered all around me. What happened to the plane? How did I survive the crash? I started searching for something to float on while calling out for help ...
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Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life. The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water.
I took a few large breaths and looked around. There was burning wreckage scattered all around me. What happened to the plane? How did I survive the crash? I started searching for something to float on while calling out for help but...
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Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life. The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water.
I took a few large breaths and looked around. There was burning wreckage scattered all around me. What happened to the plane? How did I survive the crash? I started searching for something to float on while calling out for help but...
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Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life. The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems, to him, like an eternity, he bursts out of the water.
I took a few large breaths and looked around. There was burning wreckage scattered all. What happened to the plane? How did I survive the crash? I started searching for something to float on while calling out for help. Noone a...
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Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces now whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.
The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air as he begins to scream. After what seems like an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. Looking around he quickly becoming distraught by what he sees, wreckage and flames. He searches for something to float on while he calls out for help but flames are...
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Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.
The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air and he begins to scream. After what seems, to him, an eternity, he bursts out of the water and, after taking a few large breaths, begins to look around. He quickly becoming distraught by what he sees, wreckage and flames. He searches for something to float on while he calls out for help but flames are, morbidly, th...
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Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.
The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air and he begins to scream. After ,what seems to him, an eternity, he bursts out of the water and takes a few large breaths. He quickly becoming distraught by what he sees, wreckage and flames. He searches for something to float on while he calls out for help but flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving....
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Chapter 1 - The Crash
Lifeless bodies and debris sank slowly into the Atlantic as if part of some sadistic piece of art. A wing of the now broken plane falls into the water shattering the propellor into thousands of fragments. Jagged metal pieces whizz through the water but instead of causing more destruction the commotion brings one body to life.
The man thrashes about wildly trying to make it to the safety of fresh air and he begins to scream. After ,what seems to him, an eternity, he bursts out of the water and takes a few large breaths. He quickly becoming distraught by what he sees, wreckage and flames. He searches for something to float on while he calls out for help but flames are, morbidly, the only thing he can see moving....
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As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.
" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lifts and video s...
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As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.
" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lif...
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As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.
" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lif...
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As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.
" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lif...
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As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.
" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lif...
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As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.
" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lif...
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As the sub descends a white canvas drops down over the clear glass front blocking the view. A before unseen projector clicks on and begins a movie.
" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lif...
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" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lifts and video shuts of...
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" Incenerate! Fire at your fingertips! " The ad showed a man lighting a cigarette with some kind of small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. That must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
*******Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism, must get away from the parasites(get rest of speech)" end speech with "But I chose something different, I chose the impossible! I chose...(canvas lifts and vi...
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" Incenerate! Fire at your fingertips! " The ad showed a man lighting a cigarette with some kind of small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. That must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism, must get away from the parasites(get rest of speech)" end speech as the video stops and the canvas slowly rises with "But I chose something different, I chose the im...
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"Incenerate! Fire at your fingertips!" The ad showed a man lighting a cigarette with some kind of small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. That must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism, must get away from the parasites(get rest of speech)" end speech as the video stops and the canvas slowly rises with "But I chose something different, I ch...
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" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lifts and video shuts of...
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" Incenerate! Light a fire inside! " With a man lighting a cigaretty with some really small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. Must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism and people not earning the money they are forcing people to give" end speech with "But I choose something different, I choose the impossible! I choose...(canvas lifts and video shuts of...
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"Incenerate! Fire at your fingertips!" The ad showed a man lighting a cigarette with some kind of small lighter or a lighter that fits on your finger, something strange. That must be some lighter to be on the opening ad for whatever this place was.
Then the menacing head from the lighthouse appeared with a 3 piece suit and pipe sitting on a nice leather couch. And began a long speech (this guy is intense) "evils of socialism, must get away from the parasites(get rest of speech)" end speech as the video stops and the canvas slowly rises with "But I chose something different, I ch...
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----Slugger: What are you doing there boy?
Jack got the ...
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Use it well.